The graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country

The graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country
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The line graph illustrates the data on how many different
materials
(
Paper
&
cardboard
,
Glass
containers
, Aluminium
cans
and
Plastics
) were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in an unknown country. The unit of measurement is per cent.
Overall
, the highest amount of
materials
recycled were
Paper
&
cardboard
and
Glass
containers
.
While
the recycling of other
materials
such
as Aluminium
cans
and
plastics
was not started until the
year
1986.
Although
,
plastics
were the least recycled material. In the initial
year
of 1982, only two
materials
were selected for the process of recycling i.e.,
Paper
&
cardboard
and
Glass
containers
with a
rate
of 65% approximately and 50% respectively.
However
, a similar trend was marked in 1990, when the recycling
rate
slightly decreased by a few per cent in the case of both
materials
. By the
year
1994,
Paper
&
cardboard
became the most recycled material among the others selected for recycling,
also
the recycling
rate
of
Glass
containers
steadily increased by 20% from 1990 to 60% in 2010.
On the other hand
, aluminium
cans
and
Plastics
were chosen for the recycling process in 1986 and 1990.
However
, the amount at which the
cans
were being recycled increased remarkably from around 0.5% in 1986 to about 40.5% in 2010,
although
plastic was the only material whose
recycle
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rate
was comparatively low with only 0.9% being recycled by the
year
2010.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although, however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words materials, paper, cardboard, glass, containers, cans, plastics, year, rate with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • recycled
  • materials
  • percentage
  • paper and cardboard
  • glass
  • plastic
  • metal
  • stable
  • noticeable
  • rise
  • significant increase
  • accounting for
  • consistent
  • ste steadily
  • dramatically
  • nearly
  • worth noting
  • relatively low
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