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The graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country

The graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country
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The line graph illustrates the data on how many different
materials
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 (
Paper
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 &
cardboard
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,
Glass
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containers
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, Aluminium
cans
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 and
Plastics
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) were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in an unknown country. The unit of measurement is per cent.
Overall
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, the highest amount of
materials
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 recycled were
Paper
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 &
cardboard
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 and
Glass
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containers
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.
While
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 the recycling of other
materials
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such
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 as Aluminium
cans
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 and
plastics
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 was not started until the
year
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 1986.
Although
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,
plastics
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 were the least recycled material. In the initial
year
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 of 1982, only two
materials
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 were selected for the process of recycling i.e.,
Paper
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 &
cardboard
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 and
Glass
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containers
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 with a
rate
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 of 65% approximately and 50% respectively.
However
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, a similar trend was marked in 1990, when the recycling
rate
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 slightly decreased by a few per cent in the case of both
materials
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. By the
year
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 1994,
Paper
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 &
cardboard
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 became the most recycled material among the others selected for recycling,
also
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 the recycling
rate
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 of
Glass
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containers
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 steadily increased by 20% from 1990 to 60% in 2010.
On the other hand
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, aluminium
cans
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 and
Plastics
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 were chosen for the recycling process in 1986 and 1990.
However
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, the amount at which the
cans
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 were being recycled increased remarkably from around 0.5% in 1986 to about 40.5% in 2010,
although
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 plastic was the only material whose
recycle
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recycling
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rate
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 was comparatively low with only 0.9% being recycled by the
year
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 2010.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although, however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words materials, paper, cardboard, glass, containers, cans, plastics, year, rate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • recycled
  • materials
  • percentage
  • paper and cardboard
  • glass
  • plastic
  • metal
  • stable
  • noticeable
  • rise
  • significant increase
  • accounting for
  • consistent
  • ste steadily
  • dramatically
  • nearly
  • worth noting
  • relatively low
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