The pie chart below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in new zealand in 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selcting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the online market
sales
in the categories of Use synonyms
travel
, film and music, books and clothes in New Zealand in the years 2003 and 2013
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Overall
, it is clear from the graphs that Linking Words
travel
and film with music had the highest proportion of online Use synonyms
sales
in each year. Use synonyms
Additionally
, book Linking Words
sales
showed an increase, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
sales
in the clothes category decreased
In 2003, Use synonyms
travel
Use synonyms
sales
were in first place at 36%. Use synonyms
However
, they fell after a decade to approximately 30%. Linking Words
Additionally
, film and music Linking Words
sales
were as significant as Use synonyms
travel
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sales
, with just above 20%, but in 2013, they made up exactly one-Use synonyms
third,
taking a significant proportion of online Linking Words
sales
.
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In contrast
, book online Linking Words
sales
were the lowest in 2003, with just under one-fifth, and they presented a slight rise after 10 years, making up 22%. Use synonyms
Although
clothes were the third significant figure in 2003, at about a quarter, and they decreased to 16%, making up an even lower fraction than book Linking Words
sales
in 2000.Use synonyms
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