The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
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illustrates a fluctuating but Correct your spelling
graph
grape
overall
increasing trend in the number of tourists visiting the Caribbean islan
over the eight-year period.
Correct your spelling
island
It is clear that
there were more tourists visiting the Caribbean island during the given period. Moreover
, the count of people opting to join cruise ships fluctuated, and the number of visitors staying on the island saw a slight increase.
Looking at the information in more detail, tourist
who stayed on Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
peninsula
rather than staying on cruise Correct article usage
the peninsula
ship
were approximately 0.7 million in 2010. Fix the agreement mistake
ships
Then
there's a steady increase with minor fluctuations, reaching a peak in 2017.Submitted by dlgrmaa9499 on
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