Task 1: The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the waterfront area of a town called Darwin between 2009 and 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Task 1: The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the waterfront area of a town called Darwin between 2009 and 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The 2 maps above illustrate how Darwin’s waterfront
area
developed between 2009 and 2004.
Overall
, the
area
witnessed radical changes with the most noticeable changes being the disappearance of industrial
area
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for different purposes. Meanwhile, other facilities surrounding the
lake
remain unchanged. In 2009, the school was built near the industrial
area
that contained a
lake
inside. Beyond that
area
was a convention centre,
whereas
next to the
area
were 2 swimming pools. On the left of the map was another industrial
area
with
bigger
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space, and there were 3 houses inside. The sea is located
in
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the bottom right-hand side with the fishing
area
built on it. Over the course of five years, the school,
lake
, conventional
area
, fishing
area
and 2 swimming pools remained intact.
In contrast
, it was remarkable that all the industrial
area
was replaced by residential areas.
New
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swimming pool was built near the
lake
, being the third there.
Additionally
, a new building was constructed for education purposes, and 3 more houses were erected, raising the total number of houses to 6. On the sea, one new harbour appeared.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, lake with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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