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The table shows data about the average income for one person in dollars, across two different age groups: under 18 and over 60, as well as the percentage of the poor population in three states in the US, namely California, Utah, and Florida

The table shows data about the average income for one person in dollars, across two different age groups: under 18 and over 60, as well as the percentage of the poor population in three states in the US, namely California, Utah, and Florida
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US
states
enumerately
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enumerated
enumerate
 California, Utah, and Florida provided in the table the average
income
 its
people
 gained. It
also
 showed the percentage of the minor and the retiree
americans
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Americans
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.
Additionaly
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Additionally
, the
population
 who reached the poverty line was
also
 included.
Overall
,
americans
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Americans
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 who
lived
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live
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 in California
has
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have
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 the highest
income
 among the named
states
 despite its increasing poverty line. Utah has the most minor
population
that
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which
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 has
lead
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 its average
income
 to decline compared to other
states
.
Lastly
,
People
 in Florida's
income
 was in the middle point regardless of
its
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their
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agin
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age
people
.
First,
California
the
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has the
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 largest
income
 among other
states
. It
also
 has the largest
population
 of poor
people
 residing. It has an average
population
 of
minor
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minors
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 and
retiree
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retirees
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. Meanwhile, in the state of Utah, who gained the lowest but has the least poor
people
 recorded
.
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 It has the lowest number of
people
aging
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aged
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 above 60 years old and has 28% of
people
 aged under 18 years old.
Lastly
, citizens living in Florida
has
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have
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 the top rate when it
come
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comes
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 to
minor
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minors
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 and younger
people
while
its
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it is
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 16% or the lowest in having
people
 aged under 18.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words states, income, people, population with synonyms.
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