the diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

the diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps depict how a place called "
West
Park Secondary School"
have
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changed in the
year
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years
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of
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1950, 1980, and 2010. From an
overall
perspective, it is obvious that there
were
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many changes in its layout since established in 1950,
however
, the main building (school) remained unchanged during the 70-year duration. Looking at the
west
side
, three rows of houses, which were in front of the main road, were demolished to make space for the car park and the science block in 1980. The farmland area changed its purpose into the sports field in the second stage. After 30 years since re-construction,
the
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this
car park was enlarged and
accounting
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for
three-fourth
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of the
west
side
.
Initially
, the east
side
of the studied area was for the school
buiding
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building
and the playground. In the next 30 years, the place for playing sports was relocated from the
west
side
to the east
side
of the map, and the playground was
consequencely
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consequently
consequence
being
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smaller in 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words west, side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • renovation
  • expansion
  • modernization
  • infrastructure
  • landscape
  • facade
  • demolition
  • construction
  • alteration
  • amenities
  • accessibility
  • sustainability
  • curriculum
  • enrollment
  • pedagogy
  • architecture
  • commute
  • heritage preservation
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