The charts below show the average percentages in typical mealsof three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the percentages of
sodium
, added sugar
, and saturated fat in common meals which can detrimentally affect people's health if they consume it too much.
Looking from an overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that a typical dinner which the citizens of the USA consume is composed of a huge amount
of sodium
. Also
, snacks have a considerable amount
of added sugar
.
The amount
of sodium
, saturated fat, and added sugar
are almost the same in breakfast. Each breakfast that people in the USA consume has 14% of sodium
and 16% of saturated fat and added sugar
. In contrast
, the amount
of these nutrients varies in snacks, the percentage
of sodium
and saturated fat in a typical snack is 14% and 21%, respectively, while
the percentage
of added sugar
for this
meal is 42%.
While
only 19% of lunch is made of added sugar
, the percentage
of saturated fat is 26%, and the percentage
of sodium
in this
meal is slightly more, 29%. Interestingly, a common dinner has more of these nutrients compared to breakfast and lunch. While
the percentage
of added sugar
for dinners is 23%, 37% and 43% of a dinner consists of saturated fat and sodium
, respectively.Submitted by amir1375.6 on
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