The table shows data about the average income for one person in dollars, across two different age groups: under 18 and over 60, as well as the percentage of the poor population in three states in the US, namely California, Utah, and Florida
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The table illustrates information about the mean
income
of a single individual in dollars for two designated age categories: below 18 and above 60. The table also
shows the percentage of poverty
in three different states
In America, which are California
, Utah
, and Florida
.
Overall
, poverty
rates were the lowest in Utah
and the highest in California
. However
, people in California
had the highest average income
per person as compared with the other recorded states
. The amount of poverty
and the average income
per capita in Florida
was the second highest among the recorded states
.
In Utah
, 28% of the total population was under 18, almost double California
's, but the average income
was almost one-half of California
's average income
.The proportion
of poor people in California
, however
, was 16%, almost double Utah
's proportion
.
Florida
's population contained 16% of under-18 individuals, the second highest state of that age group.Also
, Florida
had the highest proportion
of people over 60 as compared with other states
,however
, the income
average and the poverty
proportion
were the second highest, which were 2200$ and 12%, respectively.Submitted by
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