The diagrams show how the layout of a school library changed.

The diagrams show how the layout of a school library changed.
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The picture illustrates the redesigned school
library
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with its previous design five years ago.
Overall
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, it can be seen that minority
rooms
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have not been changed, even though
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of facilities have been altered or removed. The purpose of the
rooms
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on the left-hand side has changed.
While
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the number of study
tables
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has increased, one of the bookshelves has been removed. The function and capacity of the
rooms
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on the right-hand side have
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been altered. It is evident from the chart that the school authorities replaced the classroom with a recording studio, which was not available 5 years ago. The name of the room located in the left corner of the
library
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has had certain words removed. It was previously called the 'borrowing and returning desk,' but now it is just the 'borrowing desk,' even though the purpose has not changed since there are no desks for returning books. At the
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of these two
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, there is a meeting room, which, surprisingly, was not removed or replaced. Five years ago, there were four study
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at the
center
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of the
library
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. Currently, the area has become private and now includes two additional
tables
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. There were bookshelves on both sides of these
tables
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, below and above. The lower bookshelves have been replaced with desks intended for students' laptops.
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, the desk for computers in the upper right corner is now used for laptops.
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, the
library
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office has been removed from the right-hand corner, and a new conference room has been established in its place.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words library, rooms, tables with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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