The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph displays how many foreign
visitors
entered the UK for various reasons from 1989 to 2009.
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Overall
, trends of business Linking Words
visitors
and people entering the UK to see their relatives and friends increased significantly during the time Use synonyms
period
. At the same time holiday figures fluctuated wildly during the recorded Use synonyms
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while
their numbers remained the highest during the recorded Linking Words
period
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The business Use synonyms
visitors
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trend
decreased slightly from 5 Use synonyms
million
in 1989 to almost 4 Use synonyms
million
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visitors
in 1994, and Use synonyms
then
the Linking Words
trend
increased gradually to just below 8 Use synonyms
million
around 2008. After that, it went to a small drop to nearly 7 Use synonyms
million
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at the end
of the recorded Linking Words
period
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Similarly
, relatives and friends Linking Words
visitors
numbers rose steadily between 1989 and 2008, before it went to a final drop Use synonyms
at the end
of the designated Linking Words
period
.
Holiday Use synonyms
visitors
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trend
was the highest among all other trends. It fluctuated significantly from 1989 to 2004, between just below 9 Use synonyms
million
to nearly 6.5 Use synonyms
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then
the Linking Words
trend
increased slightly to just below 9 Use synonyms
million
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, period, trend, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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