Take a look at the graphics and complete the task. The table and chart provide information about unemployment and owning a home in selected European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Take a look at the graphics and complete the task.

The table and chart provide information about unemployment and owning a home in selected European countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table and chart show relevant information on the
rate
of
unemployment
and
home
ownership
(possession) in nine European countries.
Overall
, there seems to be a correlation between
unemployment
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the unemployment
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rate
and
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the home
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home
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homeownership
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ownership
rate
.
While
Italy had the highest
unemployment
rate
and
home
ownership
,
Switzerland
had the lowest of the two in 2015. As for the table, the number of people who owned their own houses in
Switzerland
, Austria, Germany, and Belgium decreased,
whereas
in France, UK, and Italy increased from 2005 to 2015. Notably, Denmark and Sweden did not witness any changes in
this
regard. Looking into more details, nearly 12%
unemployment
rate
and 75%
home
ownership
in Italy, compared to
Switzerland
was the lowest unwaged and
home
ownership
, which was close to 4% and 45% respectively. Denmark, Sweden and Belgium had relatively similar rates for both categories, 6% to 8% and 65% to 75%.
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to
second
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the second
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data desired to own a
home
during
period
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the period
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2005 and 2015, there was a
significantly
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increasing amount in Italy
71
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from 71
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to 76, which was 5. It was bigger
amongst
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than
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other countries. Followed by France and
UK
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the UK
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around 4.
In contrast
,
Switzerland
was decreasing until -3. Denmark and Sweden remained unchanged.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rate, unemployment, home, ownership, switzerland with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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