The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006 and 2007

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table compares data about the international companies that produced notebook computers market in 3 various years(2006, 2007, and 2014).
Overall
, it was important that the trend of all producers except Others and Fujitsu that had the minimum number increased in the period of 8 years;
moreover
, in 3 divers years, the best computer manufacturer was HP.
According to
the chart, the most popular computer' brand was HP, which motivation climbed slightly, at the beginning it was 31.4% after that, in 2014 it could catch on 34.25%. The Others, the second one, in 2006 had 22.8%;
however
, the percentage of it fell significantly to 7.11 in 2014. The third one was Dell, whose direction was jumping moderately. at the start, it had 16.6% ;
then
the figure had a nearly 10% rise. The picture demonstrates Samsung, which was the fourth one, in 2006 had 11.6%, but in the next year it touched the lowest point at 10.7;
nevertheless
, in the
last
year, it went up to 14.2%.
In addition
, the proportion of Toshiba and Lenovo in 2006, was the same at 6;
furthermore
, Toshiba's trends' were the same as HP's and in 2014 reached 8.12 , yet Lenovo followed the Samsung way and in 2007, became 6.2;
then
in 2014 had 7.1. Fujitsu, which was the unpopular manufacturer, had declined trend owing to the fact that in 2006 it had a 4.8;
thereafter
, in 2007 got the lowest per cent with 2.3, but in 2014 grown to 3.1.
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  • market share
  • percentage points
  • market presence
  • ranking
  • market leader
  • least market share
  • total market share
  • market consolidation
  • market diversification
  • new entrants
  • exits
  • highlight
  • compare
  • decline
  • increase
  • improvement
  • loss of ground
  • manufacturer
  • worldwide
  • notebook computer
  • notable
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