In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and dis advantages of giving children this message?

In several cultures,

children

are frequently told that they can achieve anything if they work hard for it. It is more like a

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doctor

to the

children

so they will always give the best they can do to pursue their

dream

.

However

,

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does not work like

this

. There are some conditions

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people have

been try

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anything but still fail. It is

such

a good thing if the parents want their kids to give 100 per cent in

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everything

they do. It will

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the

children

to not easily give up

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their

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dream

that they are striving for. By having

this

mindset, it will

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a child who

have

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ambitions and purposes in life. To illustrate, my brother

want

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to get

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A+ on math subjects yet he

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not good at math. Since he has

this

spirit, he

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is willing

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to study seriously and

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use

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his free time to learn. So, it has

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impacts

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for

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children

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developments

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and growth when facing struggles. On the other sides, it

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be denied that everything

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not always work as we want. There are some cases

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we failed even though we already tried our best.

For instance

, my friend had

this

kind of thought.

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she failed, she

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harder and harder. Eventually, she

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still can not gain her

dream

. Everyone told her about

this

but no one said that we can not always achieve our

dream

.

To conclude

, the

disadvantage

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is

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outweigh

than

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the

advantage

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because

this

thought will shape a bad mentality for people who

is

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trying to

get

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achieve

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their

dream

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dreams

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.

In other words

, people have to know their

limit

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and it is totally fine to fail.