The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data? summarize the information, and make a comparison.

The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data? summarize the information, and make a comparison.
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The supplied pie charts indicate the arrangement of
nurition
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nutrition
for two various dinners. A glance at the graph reveals that carbohydrates
is
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the highest
amount
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of edible in both
Medium
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Baked
Potato
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and
Macaroni
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.
However
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,other nutrients comprise the lowest proportion of food between two dinners. Precisely %52 of
Macaroni
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consist
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on
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carbohydrates (which is the highest
percentage
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of consistency),Compared to
Medium
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Baked
Potato
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at %35 carbohydrates.
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,a quarter of
Medium
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Baked
Potato
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includes protein.Whilst,a tiny fraction of
Macaroni
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has protein at %11.
In addition
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,the
percentage
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of glocose in
Medium
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Baked
Potato
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is %15,just ahead of the
amount
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of glocose in
Macaroni
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at %11.
In contrast
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,the
amount
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of saturated fat in
Medium
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Baked
Potato
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is nearly half of the
percentage
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of saturated fat in
Macaroni
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at %10 and %21,respectively.Surprisingly,the
percentage
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of other nutrients in
Medium
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Baked
Potato
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is %15 which is triple
of
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apply
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the
amount
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of other nutrients in
Macaroni
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at %5.(which is the lowest proportion of consistency among whole
food
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foods
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).

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, medium, potato, macaroni, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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