The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data? summarize the information, and make a comparison. write at least 150 words.

The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data?

summarize the information, and make a comparison. write at least 150 words.
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The supplied pie charts indicate the arrangement of
nurition
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nutrition
for two various dinners. A glance at the graph reveals that carbohydrates
is
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the highest
amount
of edible in both
Medium
Baked
Potato
and
Macaroni
.
However
,other nutrients comprise the lowest proportion of food between two dinners. Precisely %52 of
Macaroni
consist
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carbohydrates (which is the highest
percentage
of consistency),Compared to
Medium
Baked
Potato
at %35 carbohydrates.
Moreover
,a quarter of
Medium
Baked
Potato
includes protein.Whilst,a tiny fraction of
Macaroni
has protein at %11.
In addition
,the
percentage
of glocose in
Medium
Baked
Potato
is %15,just ahead of the
amount
of glocose in
Macaroni
at %11.
In contrast
,the
amount
of saturated fat in
Medium
Baked
Potato
is nearly half of the
percentage
of saturated fat in
Macaroni
at %10 and %21,respectively.Surprisingly,the
percentage
of other nutrients in
Medium
Baked
Potato
is %15 which is triple
of
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the
amount
of other nutrients in
Macaroni
at %5.(which is the lowest proportion of consistency among whole
food
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foods
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).
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, medium, potato, macaroni, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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