Traditions are about the past and innovation is about the future, and it has been argued that we need to let go of traditions for the sake of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? What role should traditions have in our lives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Traditions

normally created by society

it has

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been shaped by

cultures

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and habits

by

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a community for

long

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time.

While

innovation

is the idea

for

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creating, shaping, and helping society in the future. Some argue that

traditions

must be abandoned to foster progress, but I disagree with

this

statement. I believe both

traditions

and

innovation

are playing

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role in our lives. On the one hand, tradition is

cultural

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the cultural

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backbone

in

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society. It

is providing

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identity and continuity. They connect to us in history and heritage,

this

background that shaping us now.

For instance

, in

Indonesia

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Indonesia,

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we have "

batik

". It is

technique

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a technique

the technique

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of producing

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a colored

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colored

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design

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designs

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on

textile

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, it creates

pattern

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patterns

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by

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apply

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hand-made,

every

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and every

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fabric has

unique

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design. It takes

million

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rupiahs for one piece of

batik

. The weaknesses of traditional ways,

firstly

because it is hand-made, it will take

long

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time to finish

for

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one fabric.

Secondly

, if

wrong

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pattern

cannot

be undo

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.

Lastly

, the production is limited.

On the other hand

,

innovation

is vital for development and improvement, it

is offered

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technology

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advancement. In the modern era,

batik

able

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to print. There are a lot of

manufacture

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manufacturers

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producing

print-

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print batik

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batik

. Now people can produce hundreds

batik

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of batik

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a month,

minimize

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risk

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the risk

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wrong

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pattern

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patterns

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because the

mechine

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machine

able to set up the

pattern

and variety of

design

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designs

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.

The technology

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is very beneficial for the

economic

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due to

mass

productions

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production

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. In conclusion, I believe that

traditions

provide

foundation

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the foundation

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for continuity and stability in our lives,

therefore

we cannot let it go.

While

innovation

drive

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drives

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us to make

improvement

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improvements

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.

By finding

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balance and relevance

both

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in both

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tradition and

innovation

would be beneficial for our lives in the future.