large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promption and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. what problems does this cause? what could be done to encourage people to buy local products?

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It is said that marketing and promotion are the important parts of large
businesses
which big budgets are advocated to them in order to
persuading
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people
to buy their
products
.
This
phenomenon has led to some problems, and it is necessary that several actions should be implemented to encourage
people
to purchase local
products
. First of all, marketing in huge
amount
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of size can damage the culture of a society. Local
products
are usually
represent
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of regional traditions and customs, and they are
heritage
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the heritage
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of some generations. With
introduction
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the introduction
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of new
products
,
people
through marketing may
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be convience
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convience
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convinced
to buy them.
As a
result
, local
products
would gradually be forgotten, in fact, the regional culture would be forgotten.
For example
, there are different
type
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types
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of cheese produced by local
people
which ways of making them
heritate
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heritage
hesitate
from their ancestors. By marketing,
people
may attract to market cheese, which in turn leads to forgetting
these
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traditional cheese.
Furthermore
, marketing by large
businesses
can lead to widening the social gap. Retail
businesses
cannot mainly afford to advertise widely.
Consequently
, their jobs and
products
would disappear because
people
may prefer to buy well-known
products
, and their
products
is
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not enough famous.
As a
result
, part of
the
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society
due to
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the lost
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lost
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of their jobs may become poor, leading to
widening
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the widening
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the
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social gap. Some actions should be
done
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to
people
persuade to buy local
products
. Governments should support the local
people
or retail
businesses
by providing opportunities for them to advertise their
products
in
billbords
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billboards
and other similar ways.
As a
result
, when
people
see
the
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familar
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familiar
brands, in shops,
attract
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towards them and buy them.
In addition
, the values of traditions and customs should be culturised by either authorities
and
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or
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local
people
.
This
purpose can be done via social media or other communication means,
such
as TV or magazines.
As a
result
, the general public can be informed significant importance of traditions, and buy local
products
in order to cultural preservation. In conclusion,
while
large
businesses
have put big budgets for marketing and promotion, to persuade
people
to buy their
products
, local
products
should be supported by authorities and
people
in order to
keeping
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the cultures and
prevention of
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making social gap. These purposes would be achieved by culturalisation and advertisement.
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