The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below.

The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart

shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people

think the costs of adult education should be shared.

Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below.
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The chart shows that the majority of adults opt to study a subject in which they have an interest. Following closely, with only two
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percent
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less prevalence, the second most important reason an
adult
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decides to study is to gain
qualification
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a qualification
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. But what are the other reasons one might decide to pursue
adult
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education? Research
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shows
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that helping one's current job, improving prospects of promotion, enjoyment, the possibility of being able to change jobs and meeting new people are all
within
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the reasons. Even though
adult
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education plays an important role in the community's progress, the public thinks that 40
percent
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of the cost of each course should be paid by the individual themselves; rather than the employer or the
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. The remaining cost should be
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divided (35 vs 25
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) between the employer and the
tax payers
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taxpayers
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respectively. Considering that gaining qualifications and enhancing occupational performance are both
in
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the top 4 reasons
of
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for
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adult
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education, it would make sense to have the employer pay a higher
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percent
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per cent
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in
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of
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the
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fee.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percent, adult with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage distribution
  • stakeholders
  • pursue further education
  • financial contribution
  • survey results
  • policy implications
  • correlation
  • adult education
  • distribution of costs
  • significant differences
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