The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below.
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The chart shows that the majority of adults opt to study a subject in which they have an interest. Following closely, with only two
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a qualification
the qualification
adult
education? Research Use synonyms
show
that helping one's current job, improving prospects of promotion, enjoyment, the possibility of being able to change jobs and meeting new people are all Change the verb form
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percent
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tax payers
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