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you lost something and someone found it and send it to you.Writing aletter to that person Thanking the person explain how you must have lost it Explain what was in it and why it was important to you

#someone #aletter #person
Dear Janki, Hope
this
 letter finds you in good health and the best of spirits. thank you so much for returning my
T-shirt
 bag.
This
 bag is very important for me as I purchased it recently from the store. Actually, I visited
shopping
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last
 week. I purchased
white
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a white
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color
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colour
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T-shirt
 from
Old
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the Old
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Neavy
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Navy
 store but there was traffic because of
weekend
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. I went for
a
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billing and I paid for
this
T-shirt
 but I completely
forgot
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left
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 my
T-shirt
 bag there.
Fortunately
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 it came in your hands and you tracked my
adress
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address
 from my payment receipt. It was
very
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 important
T-shirt
 for me.
i
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 had to wear
this
T-shirt
 for my first business meeting because I believe that white color spreads positivity.
Therefore
, It was very important for me. Let me know if you need anything from me. My contact number is 98765 54321. Yours sincerely, XYZ.
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coherence cohesion
Work on paragraph structure to clearly separate different ideas.
task achievement
Elaborate slightly more on the importance of the T-shirt to provide a complete response.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is polite and appropriate for the context.
coherence cohesion
The writer offers contact information, showing willingness to reciprocate.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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