The graph and chart below give information about migration to the UK. The graph below shows how long immigrants in the year 2000-2008 intended to stay in the UK. And the pie-chart shows reasons for migration in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph and chart below give information about migration to the UK. The graph below shows how long immigrants in the year 2000-2008 intended to stay in the UK. And the pie-chart shows reasons for migration in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph and chart
provides
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migration related
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information. The graph illustrates the staying
time
of the immigrants to the
UK
between 2000 and 2008. And the pie-chart shows different reasons why
people
migrate.
Overall
, it can be seen from the graph, that each length of the
time
period, spent in the
UK
, did not change over
the
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time
, and that the most popular option is staying for less than
a
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2 years,
while
most
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unpopular is to be in the nation
betwwen
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between
2 and 4 years.
Moreover
, work and study are the
bigges
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biggest
reasons
of
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changing location.
To begin
with, in 2000 year, almost 150000 migrants were in the country for more than 4 or less than 2 years, at the same
time
only 50000
people
decided to settle in the
UK
between these
time
periods.
Then
, the shortest length of visiting the nation increased its popularity till
the
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2004. After that, the number of
people
who chose each decision
ramained
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remained
stable.
Furthermore
, almost
one third
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of
people
moved to the
UK
for their work or education,
while
only 16% of humans did it to join
family
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. Others decided to write another cause or even not to choose anything.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words time, uk, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • immigrate
  • emigrate
  • migration
  • immigrant
  • intended length of stay
  • short-term stay
  • long-term stay
  • trends
  • peaks
  • troughs
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • primary reasons
  • comparative analysis
  • contributing factors
  • data interpretation
  • work-related migration
  • study-related migration
  • family reunification
  • asylum seeking
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