The graph and chart below give information about migration to the UK. The graph below shows how long immigrants in the year 2000-2008 intended to stay in the UK. And the pie-chart shows reasons for migration in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph and chart
provides
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provide
migration related
information. The graph illustrates the staying Add a hyphen
migration-related
time
of the immigrants to the UK
between 2000 and 2008. And the pie-chart shows different reasons why people
migrate.
Overall
, it can be seen from the graph, that each length of the time
period, spent in the UK
, did not change over the
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apply
time
, and that the most popular option is staying for less than a
2 years, Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
while
most
unpopular is to be in the nation Correct article usage
the most
betwwen
2 and 4 years. Correct your spelling
between
Moreover
, work and study are the bigges
reasons Correct your spelling
biggest
of
changing location.
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for
To begin
with, in 2000 year, almost 150000 migrants were in the country for more than 4 or less than 2 years, at the same time
only 50000 people
decided to settle in the UK
between these time
periods. Then
, the shortest length of visiting the nation increased its popularity till the
2004. After that, the number of Change the article
apply
people
who chose each decision ramained
stable.
Correct your spelling
remained
Furthermore
, almost one third
of Add a hyphen
one-third
people
moved to the UK
for their work or education, while
only 16% of humans did it to join family
. Others decided to write another cause or even not to choose anything.Add an article
the family
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