The bar chart illustrates the statics of (Brunswick New , Nova Scotia, Quebec, Alberta, British Columbia, Manitoba, Newfoundland and Labrador, Ontario) International graduates, Canadian University,

The bar chart illustrates the statics of (Brunswick New , Nova Scotia, Quebec, Alberta, British Columbia, Manitoba, Newfoundland and Labrador, Ontario) International graduates, Canadian University,
The graph illustrates the proportion of international graduates in eight regions in Canadian universities in 2001 and 2006.
Overall
,
it is clear that
all regions increased from 2001 to 2006, with a clear rise in British Columbia. Focusing on 2001, New Brunswick's students accounted for 7% in 2001, which is the largest number in
this
period. Nova Scotia and Quebec are the second and third largest areas at about 6.5% and 6.0%, respectively.
In addition
, Alberta and British Columbia stay in similar positions at under 5%.
Similarly
, Manitoba and Newfoundland and Labrador's figures are about 4%. The figure for Ontario is the lowest at 4%. Turning to 2006, all regions rose significantly; four of eight countries scored approximately doubled figures within the five years. The most significant increase was seen in British Columbia, surpassing Nova Scotia at 10.2%. New Brunswick remains the top at 12%.
Although
other remainder's rank did not change throughout the period, the proportion of Manitoba, Newfoundland and Labrador and Ontario rose considerably. These figures became double compared to 2001, with 6%, 6% and 5.5%, respectively.
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