Write about the following topic: In many countries, international tourism has become an important source of income. However, it also has negative effects. Do the benefits of international tourism outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people would argue that in many

countries

,

tourism

has become an essential source of

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the country

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country

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country's

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economy.

while

it has

drawback

effects.

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essay will argue that despite

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the drawback

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drawback

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drawbacks

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the benefits of

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tourism

like

increase

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an increase

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in a

country

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country's

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income and

job

opportunities

far

outweighs

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any

drawback

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drawbacks

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. Some people think that visiting their

countries

by

tourism

has a negative impact on their

country

. they say when tourists come to their cities, they do not care about their waste, because they usually throw it everywhere, and

this

is makes

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the

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apply

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environmental pollution,

such

as

marina

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marine

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pollution.

However

, the government can put strict rules to limit

this

problem. The biggest benefits of international

tourism

are a better source of income and it increases

job

opportunities

for

countries

' people. When

tourism

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tourists

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visit any

country

, they will spend their money in hotels,

resturents

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restaurants

, and shops. That

lead

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leads

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to

increase

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an increase

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in

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the country

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country

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country's

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economy. That source of income will help them to improve their

country

.

Furthermore

, the highest number of

tourism

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tourists

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will lead to more

job

opportunities

, because of a higher demand in hotels and

resturents

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restaurants

.

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, a recent survey found that the number of jobs increased in

countries

with a high rate of

tourism

. In conclusion,

although

tourism

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tourists

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sometimes do not care about their waste, the benefits of

tourism

such

as

increases

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increased

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countries

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countries'

country's

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incomes and

job

opportunities

are

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apply

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far

outweights

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outweigh

any

drawback

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drawbacks

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. It is recommended that the government should put a rule to limit

tourism

's waste and

regulation

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regulate

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that rule, and it

it

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is

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better to give them a fine for

this

situation.