The diagram below shows the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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A presentation of a species called Lady Bird's evolution through different stages in life. It

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present

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the different

part

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parts

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of its anatomy.

First,

after mating, the Bug Lady produces numerous

number of

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eggs for about that

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to survive for about 2-5 days.

Afterward

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, it will hatch and grow to the Larval stage and survive for 21

sdays

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days

. After proceeding, it will find a comfortable and sustainable part of a leaf to attach itself to form Pupa and

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there for a week.

Lastly

, without any alterations, it will

succesfully

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successfully

becomes

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an adult and ready to survive and fly. A formed adult Bug Lady has

head

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that consists of different parts that help them hunt food. It has

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Antenna that vibrates when there's a signal coming from

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stimulus

along with

the two pinpoint eyes and the Pronotum. The Red Elytra helps these bugs to be visible due

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vibrant

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with clustered black points around it and a protective layer that covers the wings. The wings under the Red Elytra help to ascend to different places. The six Legs

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both sides

helpsin

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help in

crawling and turning to rough and slippery ground conditions. And

lastly

, it has an abdomen

that is

made for

excretion

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the excretion

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of its

feces

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

209 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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