the graph below shows the avareage monthly change in proces of three metals during 2014

the graph below shows the avareage monthly change in proces of three metals during 2014
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The line chart provides information about price ups and downs per month of copper,
nickel
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and zinc in the period of 2014. In January
nickel
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had the highest percentage change in price but it dramatically dropped till June and was only 3
percent
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at least. It’s the lowest point for all 3 metals in
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graph. Since July
nickel
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fluctuated and reached 1
percent
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in December of 2014. Copper started with a 2% change in price and had a downtrend till May.
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, it reached 1,5
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percent
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per cent
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in December 2014. Zinc showed ups and downs trends in the period of 2014 but
at the end
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of year, it rose 1
percent
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if compared with the starting point.
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it's a slightly upward trend for Zinc.
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,
Nickel
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lost about 5 % of its cost
at the end
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of
year
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the year
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and Copper lost about 0,5% till December.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end, however".
Contractions: Don't use contractions.
Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words nickel, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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