the graph below shows the avareage monthly change in proces of three metals during 2014
The line chart provides information about price ups and downs per month of copper,
nickel
and zinc in the period of 2014.
In January nickel
had the highest percentage change in price but it dramatically dropped till June and was only 3 percent
at least. It’s the lowest point for all 3 metals in this
graph.
Since July nickel
fluctuated and reached 1 percent
in December of 2014.
Copper started with a 2% change in price and had a downtrend till May. However
, it reached 1,5 percent
in December 2014.
Zinc showed ups and downs trends in the period of 2014 but Change the spelling
per cent
at the end
of year, it rose 1 percent
if compared with the starting point.
Overall
it's a slightly upward trend for Zinc. However
, Nickel
lost about 5 % of its cost at the end
of year
and Copper lost about 0,5% till December.Add an article
the year
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