The table below shows the consumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc.) owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The demonstrated data compares the percentage of British households
which owned a range of consumer durables between 1872 and 1983.
Overall
,
the ratio of English families having those goods steadily increased during
a given period. Moreover
, the most common electronic item in Britain was a
television, whereas
the least ordinary purchased dishwasher and video player.
Considering the table, TVs and vacuum cleaners were extremely popular amongst
citizens with the percentages of 93 and 87, respectively. There were minor
variations in the ownership of refrigerators from 1972 to 1983, which was 73%
in the initial year, 88% in 1976 and 94 in the last
year. The proportion of central heating appliance
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appliances
was
bought by 39% of the total domestic of Britain. Meanwhile, the percentage Verb problem
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inclined
to 55% in 1979 and continued to 64% in 1983.
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Furthermore
, only 18% of total British domiciliary people enjoyed a video in 1983, and before 1983, none of them had possession of a video player. 1978 was the year of the introduction of the dishwasher, the fewest citizens have this
electronic device. In addition
, this
rate slightly increased to 5% in 1983.Submitted by krisjeffay on
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