The graph below shows the fertility rate of women in different Gulf Countries from 1990 to 2000. Write a report describing the information in the graph below.

The graph below shows the fertility rate of women in different Gulf Countries from 1990 to 2000.

Write a report describing the information in the graph below.
The given bar charts illustrate the information about fertility
rate
according to
birth per woman in different Gulf countries comprising Bavarian, Kuwait, Qatar,
Oman
, S. Arabia and UAE between 1990 and 2000.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the percentage of births was by far the highest in
Oman
, with the opposite of
this
being true for Bahrain and Kuwait,
while
others were not seen as significant during the period.
To begin
with,
Oman
had a fertility
rate
of 7% in 1990 and decreased slightly to 5.5%,
while
S. Arabia was the second-most country which was just under 7% in 1990, saw a drop to the same
rate
as
Oman
in 2000.
Additionally
, the third-largest country among others was occupied UAE which was just above 4%, going down steadily to 3% in 2000.
Furthermore
, Qatar declined from just above 4% to 3.5% in 2000. Bavarian and Kuwait, having similar rates of birth for babies at 3.5% which was the lowest
rate
, have seen a drop in 2000 respectively to 2.5 and 2.7. In conclusion, It is clearly seen that the number of children that women give birth to has fallen over the years in all given countries.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fertility rate
  • trend
  • significant increase
  • significant decrease
  • Gulf countries
  • data
  • analyze
  • compare
  • overall
  • individual country
  • highlight
  • predict
  • period
  • rate changes
  • decline
  • rise
  • fluctuate
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