The graph below shows the fertility rate of women in different Gulf Countries from 1990 to 2000. Write a report describing the information in the graph below.

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The given bar charts illustrate the information about fertility

rate

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according to

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birth per woman in different Gulf countries comprising Bavarian, Kuwait, Qatar,

Oman

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, S. Arabia and UAE between 1990 and 2000.

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, it is noticeable that the percentage of births was by far the highest in

Oman

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, with the opposite of

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being true for Bahrain and Kuwait,

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others were not seen as significant during the period.

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with,

Oman

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had a fertility

rate

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of 7% in 1990 and decreased slightly to 5.5%,

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S. Arabia was the second-most country which was just under 7% in 1990, saw a drop to the same

rate

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Oman

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in 2000.

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, the third-largest country among others was occupied UAE which was just above 4%, going down steadily to 3% in 2000.

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, Qatar declined from just above 4% to 3.5% in 2000. Bavarian and Kuwait, having similar rates of birth for babies at 3.5% which was the lowest

rate

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, have seen a drop in 2000 respectively to 2.5 and 2.7. In conclusion, It is clearly seen that the number of children that women give birth to has fallen over the years in all given countries.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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5 paragraphs

196 words

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fertility rate
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significant decrease
Gulf countries
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