The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The two tables show the temperatures
as well as
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daylight hours in London and
Sydney
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during the same weekend in December 2018.
Overall
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, there is a vast distinction in all 3 categories in the two cities, but there is not much variation in sunrise and sunset in each table individually.
To begin
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with, Friday 28th in London had a maximum and minimum temperature of 9
°C
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and 4
°C
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respectively, compared to 26 degrees and 17 degrees Celsius in
Sydney
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, Australia. In the next two days, the capital of the United Kingdom would see fluctuating temperatures, with Saturday ranging from 3
°C
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to 13
°C
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and 5
°C
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to 10
°C
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on Sunday.
On the other hand
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, its counterpart in Australia saw a slower and more gradual increase starting at 18
°C
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to 28
°C
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to 19
°C
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to 31
°C
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on the 30th of December. The wide gap between London and
Sydney
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would present itself again when its sunrise-sunset period was 08:05 to 15:57 and slightly going up each day,
whereas
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Sydney
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enjoyed much longer periods of daylight, with an average of at least 14 hours of sunshine during the weekend.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 83%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sydney, °c with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • The tables compare
  • temperatures
  • hours of daylight
  • ranged from
  • consistently high
  • slight increase
  • remained stable
  • significantly fewer
  • enjoyed
  • overall
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