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Write a letter to your neighbour saying that you are going to be out for two weeks and ask him/her to look after your apartment. where and when are you going what duties do you want him/her to do give necessary instructions and recommendations

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
 letter to inform you that I am going on a business trip for two weeks. In three days I’ll leave my flat and will depart to Germany to teach lectures on gender equality./ on my business trip to ________TRICKY
Due to
 the dangerous situation in the country of my
visit
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visit,
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 there is a high chance that I will not be able to return. So, I have 10 chickens and 2 pigs in my flat. They need to consume
food
 regularly.
For
this
 reason. I am afraid they can die without being fed. Probably they will survive two days, though no more. FEED -FED- FED I would like you to feed my pets
while
 I am away. There is
food
 on
a
Correct article usage
the
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 balcony, but be careful because my balcony has a lot of nails and traps for
thiefs
Correct your spelling
thieves
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.If
food
 ends, please go to the store and buy
food
 for my pets. I will definitely repay you with chicken or eggs if it is possible.”Help those in need and you will be rewarded” - Matthew 25:35-40. QUOTES I would be grateful if you could contact me as soon as possible +As well, if you see
this
 letter too late, the key from the door will be under the rug. Yours sincerely, Vladimir Belitsky
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coherence cohesion
While your letter includes essential information, try to organize your thoughts more clearly. For example, you could separate your travel details from information about the pets and instructions for the neighbor.
task achievement
Your writing tone could be more polite and neighborly. Use softer language and polite requests to make your tone more suitable for the context.
task achievement
You've included all necessary details concerning your trip, the pets, and how the neighbor can assist you.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing are appropriate for a formal letter.
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