The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph illustrates the mean monthly price changes in

copper

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,

nickel

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  and

zinc

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metals in the year 2014.

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,

nickel

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started with the highest percentage and ended with the lowest

while

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zinc

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began by being the least and was the highest

at the end

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. From the start, on the one hand,

nickel

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and

copper

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both had a drop,

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on the other hand

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,

zinc

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had an increase.

Copper

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being the highest from start leading with 6%, was followed by

copper

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with 2%, they both decreased from January to March and were slightly constant for one month. 

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,

zinc

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with the lowest percentage at 1% in January had a slight increase

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2%

to

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in

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February and

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dropped in March.  Joining the other two metals, they all continued to fall

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zinc

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and

copper

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having a nose dive in June. 

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, they all increased with

Zinc

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ended

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up leading with 2%, followed by

copper

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at about 1.5% and

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apply

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nickel

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being the lowest at 1%.