The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the mean monthly price changes in
copper
, nickel
and zinc
metals in the year 2014.
Overall
, nickel
started with the highest percentage and ended with the lowest while
zinc
began by being the least and was the highest at the end
. From the start, on the one hand, nickel
and copper
both had a drop, while
on the other hand
, zinc
had an increase.
Copper
being the highest from start leading with 6%, was followed by copper
with 2%, they both decreased from January to March and were slightly constant for one month. Moreso
, Correct your spelling
Moreover
zinc
with the lowest percentage at 1% in January had a slight increase by
2% Change preposition
of
to
February and Change preposition
in
then
dropped in March. Joining the other two metals, they all continued to fall together with
zinc
and copper
having a nose dive in June. Furthermore
, they all increased with Zinc
ended
up leading with 2%, followed by Wrong verb form
ending
copper
at about 1.5% and with
Change preposition
apply
nickel
being the lowest at 1%.Submitted by pncubeterera on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words copper, nickel, zinc with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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