The Chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
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The bar chart shows the survey of 4 weeks
percentage
consuming coffee
and tea
by
five different Change preposition
in
cities
from Australia along with
type
of habits to purchase them.
Add an article
the type
Overall
, people
visiting café for tea
or coffee
always stays
Correct subject-verb agreement
stay
in
the top Change preposition
at
compare
to the Change the form of the verb
compared
people
having fresh and instant
coffee
in the last
4 weeks except in Adelaide. People
having instant
coffee
and visiting café for tea
or coffee
here seems
to be very slightly greater in Correct subject-verb agreement
seem
percentage
compared to visiting café. Whereas
residents
having fresh coffee
seems
to be low in Correct subject-verb agreement
seem
percentage
compare
to Change the form of the verb
compared
other
two habits regardless of any five Correct article usage
the other
cities
.
In Syndney
, Correct your spelling
Sydney
Melbourne
and Hobart
residents
visiting café for having tea
and coffee
always stayed in
Change preposition
at
top
with huge difference Correct article usage
the top
compare
to Wrong verb form
compared
other
2 habits which Correct article usage
the other
is
almost above 60 Change the verb form
are
percent
where Change the spelling
per cent
Melbourne
and Hobart
reaching
Wrong verb form
reached
highest
Add an article
a highest
percentage
of approximately 63%. In
contrast
Add a comma
contrast,
people
having instant
coffee
always stayed in the 2nd position in these cities
by reaching almost 55% in Hobart
, below 50% in Melbourne
and almost 45% in Sydney. Having fresh coffee
always remind
Correct subject-verb agreement
reminds
Correct pronoun usage
me in
in
the Change preposition
of
last
which is below 45% in Sydney and Melbourne
and less than 40% in Hobart
.
The percentage
difference between instant
coffee
and visiting café by the people
stayed relatively low in Brisbane and Adelaide. By reaching in and around 55% and approximately 53% by
Change preposition
of
residents
who
Correct pronoun usage
apply
visits
café and Correct subject-verb agreement
visit
having
Wrong verb form
have
instant
coffee
. But in the
Adelaide Correct article usage
apply
in
the only city where Change preposition
apply
people
having
Wrong verb form
have
instant
coffee
was slightly higher by almost 1 or less than 1 percent
. In both Change the spelling
per cent
cities
Add a comma
cities,
residents
having fresh coffee
remained always in the 3rd position with less than 35%.Submitted by nlchiranth11 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, coffee, tea, cities, people, café, instant, residents, melbourne, hobart with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stays" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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