The Chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The Chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows the survey of 4 weeks
percentage
consuming
coffee
and
tea
in five different
cities
from Australia
along with
the type of habits to purchase them.
Overall
,
people
visiting café for
tea
or
coffee
always stay at the top compared to the
people
having fresh and
instant
coffee
in the
last
4 weeks except in Adelaide.
People
having
instant
coffee
and visiting café for
tea
or
coffee
here seem to be very slightly greater in
percentage
compared to visiting café.
Whereas
residents
having fresh
coffee
seem to be low in
percentage
compared to the other two habits regardless of any five
cities
. In Sydney,
Melbourne
and
Hobart
residents
visiting café to have
tea
and
coffee
always stayed at the top with a huge difference compared to the other 2 habits which are almost above 60% where
Melbourne
and
Hobart
reached the highest
percentage
of approximately 63%.
In contrast
,
people
having
instant
coffee
always stayed in the 2nd position in these
cities
by reaching almost 55% in
Hobart
, below 50% in
Melbourne
and almost 45% in Sydney. Having fresh
coffee
always reminds me of the
last
which is below 45% in Sydney,
Melbourne
and less than 40% in
Hobart
. The
percentage
difference between
instant
coffee
and visiting café by the
people
stayed relatively low in Brisbane and Adelaide. By reaching around 55% of
residents
visit café and approximately 53% of them have
instant
coffee
. But in Adelaide, the only city where
people
have
instant
coffee
was slightly higher by almost 1 or less than 1%. In both
cities
,
residents
having fresh
coffee
remained always in the 3rd position with less than 35%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, coffee, tea, cities, people, café, instant, residents, melbourne, hobart with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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