The Chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The Chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart shows the survey of 4 weeks
percentage
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consuming
coffee
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and
tea
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in five different
cities
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from Australia
along with
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the type of habits to purchase them.
Overall
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,
people
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visiting café for
tea
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or
coffee
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always stay at the top compared to the
people
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having fresh and
instant
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coffee
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in the
last
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4 weeks except in Adelaide.
People
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having
instant
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coffee
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and visiting café for
tea
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or
coffee
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here seem to be very slightly greater in
percentage
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compared to visiting café.
Whereas
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residents
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having fresh
coffee
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seem to be low in
percentage
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compared to the other two habits regardless of any five
cities
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. In Sydney,
Melbourne
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and
Hobart
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residents
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visiting café to have
tea
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and
coffee
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always stayed at the top with a huge difference compared to the other 2 habits which are almost above 60% where
Melbourne
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and
Hobart
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reached the highest
percentage
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of approximately 63%.
In contrast
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,
people
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having
instant
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coffee
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always stayed in the 2nd position in these
cities
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by reaching almost 55% in
Hobart
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, below 50% in
Melbourne
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and almost 45% in Sydney. Having fresh
coffee
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always reminds me of the
last
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which is below 45% in Sydney,
Melbourne
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and less than 40% in
Hobart
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. The
percentage
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difference between
instant
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coffee
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and visiting café by the
people
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stayed relatively low in Brisbane and Adelaide. By reaching around 55% of
residents
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visit café and approximately 53% of them have
instant
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coffee
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. But in Adelaide, the only city where
people
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have
instant
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coffee
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was slightly higher by almost 1 or less than 1%. In both
cities
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,
residents
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having fresh
coffee
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remained always in the 3rd position with less than 35%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, coffee, tea, cities, people, café, instant, residents, melbourne, hobart with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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