The graph below shows the percentage of unemployed people aged between 15 and 24 in five European countries in 2005, compared with the overall percentage of unemployment in those countries.

The graph below shows the percentage of unemployed people aged between 15 and 24 in five European countries in 2005, compared with the overall percentage of unemployment in those countries.
The bar chart illustrates how the rate of
unemployment
varied across five distinct nations in 2005, broken down into the aged 15-24 group and the
overall
unemployment
.
Overall
, the percentage of unemployed people from the 15-24 age group surpassed that of the
overall
in all countries under review. Remarkably, the issue was most severe in Poland among the five surveyed nations. The
unemployment
rate of the 15-24 age group was higher than that of the
overall
in varying degrees. In Poland, nearly 37% were unemployed, taking over the first position. The figure for Italy closely followed, with around 28% of people aged 15-24 having no job. Under 13% was witnessed in Denmark, which was only half of the
unemployment
rates in Hungary and Germany, at around 24% for both. Shifting our focus to the
overall
unemployment
rate, it was most warning in Poland when it showed approximately 27% of people were unemployed. Notably, Germany witnessed a significant proportion of
unemployment
, at 20%, lagging behind Italy, Hungary and Denmark. The issue was less severe in Denmark since only 7% were
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