Task 1.3 You have recently flown to another country on a business trip. You were satisfied with the flight, but didn’t like services at the airport. Write a letter to the airport manager and say Give your flight details Why were you disappointed? Suggest some improvements to the airport services Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing you

this

letter because I would like to express my impression of the

airport

Last

week, on June 18, I had a flight from Amsterdam to Toronto on Canada Air flight number 13P288. The flight was comfortable, but after

arrival

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arriving

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at Toronto

Add a comma

airport,

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airport

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Airport

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I was surprised by the poor service of the

airport

. Namely, when I went through customs control, only two people worked there, which is why we went through all the processes for a very long time.

Also

, I want to add that the men's toilets were closed,

the

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and the

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staff offered us to use the women's toilet. It was very uncomfortable. I ask you to improve the quality of service at the

airport

, hire staff in the customs area and invite

Correct the article-noun agreement

apply

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special workers to fix the toilets. Toronto

Airport

is of great importance for international flights and must be of appropriate quality. I hope for

understanding

Correct pronoun usage

your understanding

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and feedback. Sincerely, Vladimir Belitskii

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
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8 paragraphs

160 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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