The dig ram below show show geo thermal energy is used to produce electricity. summarise the information by selecting and re p on tin g them in features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Geothermal
power
plant
informations
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. The
aeothermal
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geothermal
aerothermal
power
plant
is
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a cyce
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cyce
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cycle
systerm
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system
which
consis
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consists
of cold water,
the
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injection well, The production well,
condenser
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a condenser
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and Turbine and Generator.
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power
plant
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how
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it is do something.
First,
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sector
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pumped
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down 45km,
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sector
is the injection well which
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Geathermal
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zone to the production well.
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the third
sector
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which
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hot water
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up 4.5km. Fourth, the fourth
sector
is
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the condenserwhich
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condenserwhich
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condenser which
relsease
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release
released
steam into
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the rurbine
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rurbine
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turbine
.Fifth, the fifth
sector
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which
powered
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by steam into
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enerator
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generator
.
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aenerator
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generator
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powered
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by
turbine
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the turbine
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and produces
plectrcity
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electricity
.
aenerator
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generator
produce
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produces
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electricity
electicity
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electricity
given
aeothermal
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geothermal
aerothermal
powerFive
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power-five
processes All in All, There are Five processes
Geothermal
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power
plant
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plants
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. It is
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an ethermal
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ethermal
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thermal
ethereal
power
plant
running that important
fuction
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function
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Your essay needs to be more precise and focused. Currently, it lacks clear structure and has many grammatical issues that make it hard to follow.
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Try to write shorter and clearer sentences. Avoid repeating unnecessary words and make sure each sentence contributes to your main point.
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Make sure each paragraph has one main idea and supporting details. This will improve the logical flow of your essay.
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Add more specific details about each step in the process. This will help readers understand the sequence and importance of each stage.
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You have identified the main components of a geothermal power plant and described the basic process.
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The effort to organize your essay into distinct steps is commendable. This shows an understanding of the sequence in the geothermal energy production process.

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