The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie graph and bar chart illustrate the placement and kind of

dance

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lessons that children in Australia are currently attending.

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, it can be seen that most of the classes are taking place in private studios. Another noteworthy feature is that ballet is the most popular option for young people aged under 11,

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modern is mostly preferred by the oldest

age

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group. Ownership of private studios for

dance

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lessons made up almost half of the total,

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variant associated with school halls accounted for nearly one-quarter.

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trend is followed by community halls, which

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the location of 18% of

dance

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practices.

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, only one in ten of them is taking place in college-based studios. The number of students aged under 11 choosing ballet is the lowest,

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this

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value is 50% higher among the 11-16

age

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bracket.

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, modern

dance

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is the most popular type for the oldest

age

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bracket,

whereas

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this

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figure is only 300 in the youngest

age

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group.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words dance, age with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

165 words

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The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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