The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie graph and bar chart illustrate the placement and kind of
dance
lessons that children in Australia are currently attending.
Overall
, it can be seen that most of the classes are taking place in private studios. Another noteworthy feature is that ballet is the most popular option for young people aged under 11, while
modern is mostly preferred by the oldest age
group.
Ownership of private studios for dance
lessons made up almost half of the total, while
variant associated with school halls accounted for nearly one-quarter. This
trend is followed by community halls, which is
the location of 18% of Correct subject-verb agreement
are
dance
practices. However
, only one in ten of them is taking place in college-based studios.
The number of students aged under 11 choosing ballet is the lowest, while
this
value is 50% higher among the 11-16 age
bracket. In contrast
, modern dance
is the most popular type for the oldest age
bracket, whereas
this
figure is only 300 in the youngest age
group.Submitted by Aqxniet on
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