You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The given map illustrates the changes that Ryemouth

village

has been through from 1995 until the present day. In 1995 the Ryemouth

village

was surrounded by farmland and a forest park in the

South-East

Correct your spelling

Southeast

show examples

area

of the

village

. On the South side, we can find the sea and

also

a fishing port.

Whereas

, the fish market could be found on the beach near the

road

, the same

road

connected to the

village

shops and to the hotel.

This

road

is linked with another that leads to the housing

area

of the

village

. It can be seen that in the present day, some changes have been made over the years, one of them being the removal of the fishing port and

also

the fact that the fish market was now turned into apartments and in front of them now can be found a restaurant. Another change that has been made is that the farmland

area

and the forest park are now a golf field and a tennis court.

In addition

, the hotel made some improvements by building a car park near them. Over the years the housing

area

has increased as the

village

built one more

road

in the West-Nord

area

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200 words

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Governments in many countries have recently introduced special taxes on foods and beverages with high levels of sugar. Some think these taxes are a good idea while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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