You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. 

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth  between 1995 and present.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 

Write at least 150 words.
The given map illustrates the changes that Ryemouth
village
has been through from 1995 until the present day. In 1995 the Ryemouth
village
was surrounded by farmland and a forest park in the
South-East
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Southeast
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area
of the
village
. On the South side, we can find the sea and
also
a fishing port.
Whereas
, the fish market could be found on the beach near the
road
, the same
road
connected to the
village
shops and to the hotel.
This
road
is linked with another that leads to the housing
area
of the
village
. It can be seen that in the present day, some changes have been made over the years, one of them being the removal of the fishing port and
also
the fact that the fish market was now turned into apartments and in front of them now can be found a restaurant. Another change that has been made is that the farmland
area
and the forest park are now a golf field and a tennis court.
In addition
, the hotel made some improvements by building a car park near them. Over the years the housing
area
has increased as the
village
built one more
road
in the West-Nord
area
.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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