The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007.
The given graph depicts the consumption of three spreads namely(margarine, low fat and reduced spreads and butter)in 1981 and 2007
Inclusively,the consumption of butter
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higher than other spreads, except margarine Add a missing verb
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figure underwent a declining trend.
On the whole, at the beginning period the fraction of Linking Words
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butter
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higher than others at over 140 Add a missing verb
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it jumped to 160 in 1986.Linking Words
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there was a dramatic dip by around 105 Linking Words
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margarine stood at approximately 90 Change preposition
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it fluctuated slightly to 100 in 1991.After fluctuating, it remained the same until 1996 and by 2007 Linking Words
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figure continued a considerable decline of 60 Linking Words
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.Low fat and reduced spreads Use synonyms
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been consumed since 1996 and it started the period at over 15 Change the verb form
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sharp improvement in the consumption of the low fat and reduced spreads to nearly 80 till 2001 and.In 2007 it faced a dropping trend from 80 to roughly 75 Change the article
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