The chart below shows the distribution of different income groups in cities and regional centres of Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart depicts the distribution of income
groups, namely low (40,000
dollars
or less), lower middle (40,00 - 70,000 dollars
), middle (70,000 - 120,00 dollars
), and high (120,000 dollars
or more) in the cities and the regional centres of Australia.
Overall
, both the items of the low and lower medium show a higher rate in the cities and the regional centres. In contrast
, the options of medium and high account for less percentage, not surpassing 25%.
Looking at the cities in detail, the intermediate range accounts for the highest
percentage (35%), and the lower intermediate has a second rank (30%). On the other hand
, high revenue makes up 20%, and its counterpart approximately constitutes 12.5%.
Subsequently
, in the regional centres, the proportion of the lower moderate has the highest rank (roughly 34%). Next,
moderate earning represents about 21%, and the low wage rate approximately makes up 22%. Furthermore
, the high income only accounts for 15%, with the lowest proportion.Submitted by daniellin0717 on
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