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The graph below shows the percentage of households not having access by reason in Great Britain between 2008 and 2014

The graph below shows the percentage of households not having access by reason in Great Britain between 2008 and 2014
The chart compares various reasons why households in Great Britain lack
internet
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access
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 from 2008 to 2014.
Overall
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, it can be seen that regarding the two main reasons, not needing the
internet
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 and a lack of skills, the trend upward throughout the period,
while
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 that for the other reasons was fairly flat.
For example
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, approximately one-third of households did not need
internet
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access
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 in 2008 compared to more than half in 2014.
By contrast
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, there was a rise in the percentage of households without
internet
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access
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 because of a lack of skills, from about 15% in 2oo8 to just over 30% in 2014. The trend in the proportion for high equipment cost costs was slightly downwards, 10% compared to 13% in 2000 and 2014 respectively. As regards high
access
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 cost, the trend was flat with a peak of about 15% in 2010 from 11% in 2008, but the privacy of security was less concerned with the percentage given
this
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 reason,
however
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, doubled between 2008 and 2014, from approximately 3% to 6%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words internet, access with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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