The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The illustration demonstrates how

honey

is produced by the

bees

. There are a few steps taken in order to make

honey

. These

includes

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collecting, storing and drying. The first stage of the process starts

where

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the

bees

forms

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form

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the

beeswax

honey

cells. After it is completed, the

bees

goes

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on a search for

nectar producing

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nectar-producing

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flowers around the hive. When each

bees

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bee

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found

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its flower, it starts collecting the

nectar

. Which is

then

brought back to the hive and stored in the

beeswax

cells. Following that the

bees

gets

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into a position and use

its

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wings to produce a warm breeze that dries the

nectar

. When it drys, water evaporates

to

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the air. Once the

honeyhas

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honey has

money has

dried out, the

bees

put a lid over the

honey

using

a

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fresh

beeswax

, similar to a jar.

Finally

, the hive is

then

collected and sealed in a jar to be stored. In conclusion, the process of the production of

the

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sweet

honey

is ensured by the collecting of

nectar

by the

bees

, which

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is then

then

isthen

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is then

storedin

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stored in

stored

beeswax

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cell and

celland

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cells and

dryed

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dried

using their wings