The table below shows the consumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc.) owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The table below shows the consumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc.) owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983. Write a report for a university lecturer 

describing the information shown below.
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The illustrated data represents the percentages of durables owned in Britain between 1972 and 1983.
Overall
, the consumer demand for each of the demonstrated devices has steadily increased. One of the least seemingly used as a dishwasher when in 1972 there were no production and people started to buy it in 1978 around 3%, which is only increased to 5% in the
last
given year. Households
such
as telephones, washing machines, refrigerators and television have been implemented respectively and consequentially the need for them has been rising
accordingly
.
However
, the vacuum cleaner showed high interest between 1972 and 1982,
whereas
in 1983 nobody appeared to need it.
On the other hand
, central heating was one of the least used at houses, only for33 per cent in the first represented year of English families ,
although
in 1983 appropriately grew to 64 per cent.
Additionally
, the video operation did not show any small popularity in consumption until 1983, when only 18% of the population in that area could afford it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Consumer durables
  • Annual trends
  • Ownership percentage
  • Notable increases/decreases
  • Milestones
  • Initial/final ownership
  • Comparative analysis
  • Significant changes
  • Overall trend
  • Shifts in ownership
  • Patterns in data
  • Year-on-year analysis
  • Implications
  • Data highlights
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