The chart below shows the percentage of females aged 16-25 in a particular country who participated in sports, compared to those who watched sports, in 2000.

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The given bar chart illustrates the percentage of women in a specific country being a spectator or a player in sports including

tennis

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, gymnastics, basketball, badminton, golf, and horse riding during 2000.

Overall

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it is clear that

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they were not fascinated by horse riding neither watching nor participating.

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tennis

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and basketball managed to attract females' attention.

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with, playing

tennis

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, the percentage of women who enjoy being a spectator (60%) is double that of being a player (50%).

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, they tend to play golf as much as they want to play

tennis

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, but only 10 per

cent

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of them want to watch golf. With regards to basketball, there is a small difference between the percentages of participants and watchers which are 55% and 50% respectively. Regarding gymnastics, almost twice of females want to watch gymnastics rather than doing it which are percentages of 20 and 9. In 2000, badminton with 5 per

cent

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and horse riding with 6 per

cent

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saw the least attention from females in watching

while

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their interest in playing was approximately 11 per

cent

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and 3 per

cent

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

184 words

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The chart below shows the percentage of females aged 16-25 in a particular country who participated in sports, compared to those who watched sports, in 2000.

People living in the 21st century have a better quality of life than the previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days many people leave their country to work abroad and take their family with them. Do you think benefits of this outways disadvantages in family developement.

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