The chart below shows the percentage of females aged 16-25 in a particular country who participated in sports, compared to those who watched sports, in 2000.

The chart below shows the percentage of females aged 16-25 in a particular country who participated in sports, compared to those who watched sports, in 2000.
The given bar chart illustrates the percentage of women in a specific country being a spectator or a player in sports including
tennis
, gymnastics, basketball, badminton, golf, and horse riding during 2000.
Overall
,
it is clear that
they were not fascinated by horse riding neither watching nor participating.
Furthermore
,
tennis
and basketball managed to attract females' attention.
To begin
with, playing
tennis
, the percentage of women who enjoy being a spectator (60%) is double that of being a player (50%).
Additionally
, they tend to play golf as much as they want to play
tennis
, but only 10 per
cent
of them want to watch golf. With regards to basketball, there is a small difference between the percentages of participants and watchers which are 55% and 50% respectively. Regarding gymnastics, almost twice of females want to watch gymnastics rather than doing it which are percentages of 20 and 9. In 2000, badminton with 5 per
cent
and horse riding with 6 per
cent
saw the least attention from females in watching
while
their interest in playing was approximately 11 per
cent
and 3 per
cent
.
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