THE MAPS BELOW SHOW THE VILAGE OF sTOKEFORD IN 1930 ANDIN 2010. SUMMARISE THE INFORMATION BY SELECTINGG AND REPORTING THE MAIN FEATURES AND MAKE COMPARISON WHERE RELEVANT

THE MAPS BELOW SHOW THE VILAGE OF sTOKEFORD IN 1930 ANDIN 2010. SUMMARISE THE INFORMATION BY SELECTINGG AND REPORTING THE MAIN FEATURES AND MAKE COMPARISON WHERE RELEVANT
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The map illustrates changes that took place in the countryside area of Skoteford from 1930 to 2010.
Overall
, the village altered from farmland into industrial and it can be noticed in destroyed farms.
To begin
with, in 1930 from south-east to east-north there used to be farmlands that were replaced by sleeping quarters. In the middle of the area, there were massive apartments with gardens which after being expanded turned into retirement houses. Beyond the homes, there
were
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a school that became larger. On the north side, there was a bridge under the Stoke River which faced nothing in 2010. There was a line of shops and a post office on the west side in 1930.
While
the shops were knocked down the post office remained steady.
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