The chart gives information about UK immigration, emigration and net migration between 1999 and 2008

The chart provides information on UK

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emigration

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, and net

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between 1999 and 2008.

Overall

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, both

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and

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rates

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increased over the period, with

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figures being consistently higher. Net

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saw significant peaks in 2004 and 2007. In 1999, around 450,000 people immigrated to the UK,

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approximately 300,000 emigrated, resulting in a net

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of about 160,000.

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pattern remained fairly stable until 2003. From 1999 to 2004,

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rates

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rose sharply by nearly 150,000 people, peaking at nearly 600,000 in 2004.

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also

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saw a gradual increase, with a slight dip in 2004. After 2004,

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rates

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remained high but showed some fluctuations. The number of emigrants

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varied, with a significant drop in 2007 before rising again to about 420,000 in 2008.

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, net

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peaked at approximately 240,000 in 2007 but fell back to around 160,000 in 2008. In conclusion,

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both

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and

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rates

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showed an upward trend over the period, the higher

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rates

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resulted in positive net

migration

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, with notable peaks in 2004 and 2007.

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