The chart below gives information about hoe families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart given illustrates data about families and their weekly
wages
and in
what various goods and services they Change preposition
on
choose
to spend their money Wrong verb form
chose
between
1968 and 2018.
It can be seen that in 1968, people have Change preposition
on between
spend
most of their income on food, Change the verb form
spent
while
in 2018 the proportion of wages
spend
on food has decreased over the years. Wrong verb form
spent
Whereas
, the housing category showed a significant risen
in 2018. Replace the word
rise
Meanwhile
the proportion of salary Add a comma
Meanwhile,
spend
on household goods remained the same over the period given.
The food section was ranked first in the class hitting its peak in 1968 with 35% of Change the form of the verb
spent
wages
spend
on it, over time the proportion has fluctuated over 15% in 2018. Change the form of the verb
spent
In contrast
, the housing category displayed an upward trend from having
10% in 1968 to almost 20% in 2018. In 2018, families Unnecessary verb
apply
spend
Wrong verb form
spent
the
less of their Correct article usage
apply
wages
on personal goods hitting almost 5%, while
in 1968, families spend
Wrong verb form
spent
the
less on fuel and power section hitting over 5%.Correct article usage
apply
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words wages with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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