The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graphs illustrate the proportion of
films
released by genre and the rate of ticket
sales
in each genre between 1996 and 2006 in Someland
.
Correct your spelling
Homeland
Overall
, there was a similar upward trend in the percentage of drama, comedy, fantasy
movies in both announcements and the figure of tickets sold, Correct word choice
and fantasy
whereas
romance films
experienced a contrasting movement over the given period.
A more detailed look at the charts clearly shows that the proportion of releasing drama films
had a significant increase from over 25% to 35%, while
the number of ticket
sales
experienced a less slight rise from approximately 15% to merely 17% over the 4 years
period. Correct your spelling
4-year
Additionally
, the figure of
comedy type both released and Change preposition
for
ticket
sales
in 1996 was 20%, which was 25% higher than that percentage in 2000.
On the other hand
, the data of
the fantasy movies made available in 1996 was over 10% Change preposition
for
then
went up by 5% in 2000. In fact, the rate of ticket
sales
of that kind of movie was around 5% in 1996 and under 10% in 2000. Moreover
, the percentage of romantic films
released remained unchanged at 5% over 4 years. In addition
, the figure of
romantic film tickets sold was 5% in 1996 Change preposition
for
then
fell minimally to around 2% in 2000.Submitted by midden-02.tore on
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