The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graphs illustrate the proportion of
films
released by genre and the rate of Use synonyms
ticket
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sales
in each genre between 1996 and 2006 in Use synonyms
Someland
.
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Homeland
Overall
, there was a similar upward trend in the percentage of drama, comedy, Linking Words
fantasy
movies in both announcements and the figure of tickets sold, Correct word choice
and fantasy
whereas
romance Linking Words
films
experienced a contrasting movement over the given period.
A more detailed look at the charts clearly shows that the proportion of releasing drama Use synonyms
films
had a significant increase from over 25% to 35%, Use synonyms
while
the number of Linking Words
ticket
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sales
experienced a less slight rise from approximately 15% to merely 17% over the Use synonyms
4 years
period. Correct your spelling
4-year
Additionally
, the figure Linking Words
of
comedy type both released and Change preposition
for
ticket
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sales
in 1996 was 20%, which was 25% higher than that percentage in 2000.
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On the other hand
, the data Linking Words
of
the fantasy movies made available in 1996 was over 10% Change preposition
for
then
went up by 5% in 2000. In fact, the rate of Linking Words
ticket
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sales
of that kind of movie was around 5% in 1996 and under 10% in 2000. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the percentage of romantic Linking Words
films
released remained unchanged at 5% over 4 years. Use synonyms
In addition
, the figure Linking Words
of
romantic film tickets sold was 5% in 1996 Change preposition
for
then
fell minimally to around 2% in 2000.Linking Words
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