The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graphs illustrate the proportion of
films
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released by genre and the rate of
ticket
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sales
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in each genre between 1996 and 2006 in
Someland
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Homeland
.
Overall
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, there was a similar upward trend in the percentage of drama, comedy,
fantasy
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and fantasy
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movies in both announcements and the figure of tickets sold,
whereas
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romance
films
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experienced a contrasting movement over the given period. A more detailed look at the charts clearly shows that the proportion of releasing drama
films
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had a significant increase from over 25% to 35%,
while
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the number of
ticket
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sales
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experienced a less slight rise from approximately 15% to merely 17% over the
4 years
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4-year
period.
Additionally
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, the figure
of
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for
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comedy type both released and
ticket
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sales
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in 1996 was 20%, which was 25% higher than that percentage in 2000.
On the other hand
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, the data
of
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for
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the fantasy movies made available in 1996 was over 10%
then
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went up by 5% in 2000. In fact, the rate of
ticket
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sales
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of that kind of movie was around 5% in 1996 and under 10% in 2000.
Moreover
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, the percentage of romantic
films
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released remained unchanged at 5% over 4 years.
In addition
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, the figure
of
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for
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romantic film tickets sold was 5% in 1996
then
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fell minimally to around 2% in 2000.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words films, ticket, sales with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • depict
  • significant increases/decreases
  • highlighting
  • drawing comparisons
  • discrepancies
  • notable trends
  • unexpected findings
  • anomalies
  • phenomenon
  • emphasizing
  • evolution
  • implications
  • producers
  • distributors
  • audiences
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