The chart below shows the percentage of young people in higher education in four different countries in 2000, 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of young people in higher education in four different countries in 2000, 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the proportion of young adults pursuing higher education in 4 different nations in 2000, 2005, and 2010.
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, we observe that, since 2000 the percentage of people doing masters has been growing at an almost steady rate.
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, B witnessed a minor fluctuation.
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, in D and C,the ratio of young students to other students who had taken admission to a college, between 2005 and 2010, for
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had remained the same. On closer examination, it can be seen that, in 2000, approximately 38% of the people pursuing higher education were not old age or senior citizens.
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number later increased by 12 and 10 points in 2005 and 2010 respectively.
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, in 2000,
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figure for B was close to 46%, but after 5 years
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was exactly 41%. Despite
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, in 2010, the value again grew by 2 points. For C and D, during both 2005 and 2010,
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was nearly 52% and 79% respectively.
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