You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map and chart below show the information for the global willingness to eat insect products and the current price for certain food available on the market place. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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provided
the global Wrong verb form
provides
willingness
information to eat insect products . It also
shows the price of certaim
food available currently.
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certain
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, it Correct your spelling
Overall
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that most of the Add a missing verb
is clear
area
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per cent
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forty
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two different area
percent
between 30-35 and the other few Change the spelling
per cent
area
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areas
percentage
.
Replace the word
per cent
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the
willingness
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other . they are all around thirty to thirty-six per cent. Next to AFRICA Correct your spelling
each
wich
percent 39% . Correct your spelling
which
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, JAPAN has also
a low willingness
number , it is 21%.
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to the Correct your spelling
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high-per cent
area
, MEXICO acount
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account
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for about
while
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words willingness, area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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