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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write Owende

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write Owende
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The bar chart below demonstrates the
amount
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number
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 of
households
 in the US by their annual salary in 2007, 2011
as well as
 2015.
Overall
, with the exception of the “$100,000 or more”
group
, the number of
households
 in each category either stayed the same or fluctuated slightly.
To begin
 with, the “Less than $25,000” category accounted for 25
million
households
 in 2007,
then
 went up to 28
million
 before settling down at 27
million
 8 years later. The “$25,000-$49,999”
group
 started out with above 25
million
 US
households
, and
then
reaching
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reached
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 an all-time high of 30
million
households
 before decreasing to somewhere around 28
million
. The 3rd and 4th
group
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groups
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 did not change much, with the former remaining still throughout the years and the latter going from just below 15
million
households
 to
exactlly
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exactly
 15
million
.
Last
 but not least, the “$100,000 or more”
group
 started out at approximately 30
million
households
 before matching the first category at 28
million
 before reaching a peak of 33
million
 US
households
.
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