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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write Owende

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write Owende
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The bar chart below demonstrates the
amount
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number
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 of
households
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 in the US by their annual salary in 2007, 2011
as well as
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 2015.
Overall
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, with the exception of the “$100,000 or more”
group
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, the number of
households
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 in each category either stayed the same or fluctuated slightly.
To begin
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 with, the “Less than $25,000” category accounted for 25
million
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households
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 in 2007,
then
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 went up to 28
million
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 before settling down at 27
million
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 8 years later. The “$25,000-$49,999”
group
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 started out with above 25
million
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 US
households
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, and
then
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reaching
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 an all-time high of 30
million
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households
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 before decreasing to somewhere around 28
million
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. The 3rd and 4th
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group
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groups
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 did not change much, with the former remaining still throughout the years and the latter going from just below 15
million
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households
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 to
exactlly
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exactly
 15
million
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.
Last
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 but not least, the “$100,000 or more”
group
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 started out at approximately 30
million
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households
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 before matching the first category at 28
million
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 before reaching a peak of 33
million
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 US
households
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