Some educationalists think that international exchange visits will benefit teenagers at the school. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In the era of globalization, many educationalists would want to have more international

exchange

visits

for their

students

because these programs can be useful for them in many ways. I strongly believe that

this

idea has more advantages than disadvantages.

Firstly

, I would say human beings have an inborn tendency to try new things, thereby people want to explore different places to get to know other cultures than their traditional ones. Teenagers are at the age when they have tremendous curiosity about the world, so if we give them chances to

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visits

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other

countries

' schools, it would benefit them in terms of education. The first reason is that they can make international friends, and

then

they will

exchange

their knowledge, connecting to other knowledge networks so they can bring them to their own

countries

to enhance their country's educational systems.

In addition

, they can be exposed to other cultures and languages, so they can understand more about the world's diversity, feel proud of their

countries

, nurture their patriotism, and tend to bring their traditional cultural heritages to international friends, enhancing their country's reputation.

However

,

this

trend could have some disadvantages on the

students

' side. The first one is that

this

can be a financial burden for them because international

visits

require a significant amount of money for

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and accommodations. Meanwhile, teenagers usually do not have enough money to afford those things, and not all parents can either. In that case, governments should focus more on education, raising

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to encourage schools to have more

exchange

visits

to other

countries

for their

students

.

To conclude

, international

exchange

visits

would be very good chances for young people to be exposed to different people,

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about their culture and knowledge, and

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it back to their school, thereby indirectly enhancing their country's education systems.

However

, governments have to help schools to encourage them to invest in their

students

,

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future generations of their

countries

.