The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the food consumption of each person in one
year
during a 60-Use synonyms
year
period from 1950 to 2010 in Austria. Use synonyms
In addition
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graph provides five categories, respectively vegetables, fruit, meat, bread, and seafood.
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Overall
, over Linking Words
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period between 1950 and 2010, vegetables consecutively accounted for the highest amount of kilogram. Linking Words
In contrast
, seafood comprised the lowest amount of Linking Words
kg
.
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To begin
with, in 1950, the amount of vegetables at 140 Linking Words
kg
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Then
it was fluctuating until 2000, ultimately representing a peak at 160 Linking Words
kg
in the Use synonyms
year
2010. Use synonyms
Subsequently
, fruit generally showed an increased trend over the period, with the exception of the Linking Words
year
1960 to the Use synonyms
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1980. Next is meat, Use synonyms
although
it reached a peak in the Linking Words
year
1990 (approximately 120 Use synonyms
kg
), it dramatically decreased to 80 Use synonyms
kg
in 2010 eventually.
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On the other hand
, bread provided Linking Words
a
upward trend before 1970; Change the article
an
nevertheless
, it began to decline gradually until 2000 but started ring again to 60kg. As for seafood, in general, its trend remained unchanged at 20 Linking Words
kg
. Use synonyms
However
, it still represented a slight change in the Linking Words
year
1960 and the Use synonyms
year
2010.Use synonyms
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